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  • What would make you feel immortal ?

  • To tell you what would make me feel immortal, I have to tell you a little story that happened to me when I was 8 or 9.
  • In fact, I was watching TV, it was a show or something like that, and this was talking about Patrick Bruel, a french singer.
  • There was an interview, and one time, they filmed him on stage for a concert, he was singing, playing his guitar, and everybody in the audience was raising his lighter above his head, singing and swinging from side to side.
  • And I told myself "Oh my god, that would just be insane to live that !".
  • I know I have no chance to live that kind of thing one day, it's inaccessible to me.
  • Being on a huge scene, just me, my guitar, the micro, and in front of me, this sea of people, raising their cell, singing the song I wrote myself...

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    • To tell you what would make me feel immortal, I have to tell you a little story that happened to me when I was 8 or 9.
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    • In fact, I was watching TV, it was a show or something like that, and this was talking about Patrick Bruel, a french singer.
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    • There was an interview, and one time, they filmed him on stage for a concert, he was singing, playing his guitar, and everybody in the audience was raising his lighter above his head, singing and swinging from side to side.
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    • Being on a huge scene, just me, my guitar, the micro, and in front of me, this sea of people, raising their cell, singing the song I wrote myself...
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