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    • I have two kind of dreams, a big dreams it's especialy for a great goal for my life they are dreams who taking a lot of time and taking a lot of energie......second kind of dreams are small dreams,that dreams takes a short times and a bit of energie as possible. my small dream is speaking English fluently .

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    • I have two kind of dreams, a big dreams it's especialy for a great goal for my life they are dreams who taking a lot of time and taking a lot of energie......second kind of dreams are small dreams,that dreams takes a short times and a bit of energie as possible. my small dream is speaking English fluently .
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    • I have two kind of dreams, a big dreams it's especialy for a great goal for my life they are dreams who taking a lot of time and taking a lot of energie......second kind of dreams are small dreams,that dreams takes a short times and a bit of energie as possible. my small dream islong term goals and short term goals. One of my goals is to learn to speaking English fluently .
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    • I have two kind of dreams, athe big dreams: it's especially for a great goal forin my life they. There are dreams whoich takinge a lot of time and takinge a lot of energiey...... The second kind of dreams are is small dreams,that, those dreams takes a short times and a bit of energie as possible. my smally. ¶My little dream is to speaking English fluently . .
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