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Text from vaness182 - English

  • My day

    • Today is thursday, January 10th.
    • The weather is quite warm, the temperature is 70º f, but I feel more heat.
    • this afternoon, I and Vivi play with a metre, Vivi asked me, how tall are you?.
    • Then, she have said, you stood up beside the wall.
    • Later the took the metre and she measured me.
    • I'm 5.21 ft, because my nickname is chikis, which means "little girl", Today started again the classes, I'm 10th school year.
    • Today, few people went to school, because it's the first day, I went but I bored, because my girlfriend is trip.
    • When I came back home, before, I don't wanted came back on the school bus and I wanted came back walk on foot.
    • When I was walking, I want to ice cream, then I went to the mall, and I bought a ice cream, but now I think it was not a good idea.
  • Because, I've bought a strawberry chocolate ice cream in the store, This ice cream is the favorite of Xiomy.
    • Tomorrow is Friday, I'm going to the school but not be the same without her, I like dance, talk and hold her hand.
  • My room is big, always, when I come back from the street and set my backpack or my purse or my clothes on the sofa.
    • My room is a disorder, always that Xiomy stay here I tidy up the room.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English