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- Hello friends, my name is Natasha, i learn English and my it very cool.
- Lern in usually scool.
- I go in for sports.

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- Hello friends, my name is Natasha, i learn English and my it very cool.
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- Hello friends, my name is Natasha~~, i~~.¶I learn English and my english its very cool.
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- Hello friends, my name is Natasha~~, i~~.I am learning English ~~and my it very cool~~which I find exciting.
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- Hello friends, my name is Natasha~~, i~~. I learn English and myI find it very cool.
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- Lern in usually scool.
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- ~~Lern in~~I usually learn English at school.
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- ~~Lern in usually scool.~~I am currently studying.
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- ~~Lern in usually~~I learn the English language in school.
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- I go in for sports.
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- I go ~~in for~~to sports.
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- I ~~go in for~~also play sports.
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- I ~~go in for~~also play sports.
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