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- My request
- I live in Paris at 10 minutes far from the Effeil Tower I have a two room appartement I propose you a sofa bed.
- I accept on personne or one couple for 2-3 week if you can invite me 2-3 week in England.
- And before I accepte you, I want speak frequently with you on skype to develop confidence

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- My ~~request~~Offer
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- I live in Paris at 10 minutes far from the Effeil Tower I have a two room appartement I propose you a sofa bed.
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- I live in Pari~~s a~~is, about 10 minutes ~~far~~ from the Effeil Tower.¶I have a two room appartement. ¶I ~~propose~~can offer you a sofa bed.
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- I live in Paris about 10 minutes ~~far~~away from the Effeil Tower.¶I have a two room appartement ~~¶I propose~~, I can offer you a sofa bed.
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- I accept on personne or one couple for 2-3 week if you can invite me 2-3 week in England.
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- I ~~accept~~can take one personne, or ~~one~~a couple, for 2- to 3 weeks if you ~~can~~would invite me 2-for a 2 to 3 week stay in England.
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- And before I accepte you, I want speak frequently with you on skype to develop confidence
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- ~~And~~But before I accepte you, I w~~ant speak frequently~~ould like to speak with you ,on sSkype ~~to develop confidence~~, for a while, to get to know you.
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