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Text from Diane141 - English

  • personality

  • When we grow up, we surrounded by our family and friends.
  • That is why our personality is linked to our circle of acquaintances.
  • Indeed, it's in the chilhood that the personality is made.
  • At this age, it are ones we love that we want to imitate to look like them.
  • Generally, parents are models of children but also the best friends or favorites celebrities.
  • The personality relay a lot on sociological environment, customs and dominant uses in this environment, values...
  • Thus while observing the circle of acquaintances it's possible to know that and to reproduce it to fit into our society.
  • Each has got the own character, having for root, the nature of his models.
  • For example, the father is the one who brings the child to take consciousness of world which surround him.
  • From the first ages, the father causes a faster awakening, a sociability more open and a control of the earlier language.
  • The mother is a model of feminity for girls whereas the father is a model of virility for boys.
  • It's important to a child to have his parents because a lack of one of the two can cause a mental imbalance of the child.
  • If the father is absent and if the mother présents an excess of sentimentalism, the child will be weak, capricious.
  • Opposite, if she's authoritarian and possessive, the child will not trust him, he'll feel a constant feeling of insecurity, causing a being lacking character, courage.
  • Then the friends, the celebrities enrich our personality already made by our family.
  • Finally, we are going to oppose our models to have our own personality.

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