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  • She was Caroline- A short story

  • She was the most beautiful girl I’ve never seen, she had the most cutest face on earth, was a porcelain doll sculpted taking care of every single detail.
  • She has a beautiful long black hair which made her seem the portrait of a virgin.
  • This girl had on her little hands a chain which was very curious for me.
  • She spent the whole class seeing it.
  • Everybody in the school was wondering about the chain as she didn't talk to much and she was always get lost seeing her chain.
  • I didn't understand what was so special in that pretty accesory, but I really wanted to know it.
  • I was sat behind she.
  • It was my third English class day in that group, but I had been seeing that mysterious girl for long time ago.
  • I knew only her last name.
  • Never would I have imagined that this day the fortune would put her in my way.
  • When the classes finished I went back home.
  • I opened the door and she was there, again the girl of my English class, the one with the chain.
  • -Hello, Thomas- told me Mary, my little sister who was in the living room with the girl -Hello, Mary and… -Caroline is my name-.
  • My god, finally I got her name.
  • She was Caroline, my sweet Caroline whose slight voice perforate still my mind.
  • -She is my new teacher.- said Mary -Oh, that interesting, I didn't expect to find you here -Nor I- said me Caroline She began to visit my sister all Mondays and friday to help her to reinforce the lessons from school and I was waiting for her too.
  • I just was waiting her fixed in front of the window.
  • Many weeks spent, and every time she arrive we talk more and more. whatever comment I made was a clever excuse to know her.
  • I was happy, and I knew that Caroline would start to love me as I loved her but each time I made her smile she was seeing her chain and suddenly she was quiet, I was feeling she was trying to tell me something but she cannot.
  • So, I just stay quiet while my heart was wanting to cry what I was feeling.
  • One day, I arrived to school and wanted to say her how much I loved her, I was ready for take the risk; but something rare happened that day, she ignored me all the morning.
  • The next day Caroline didn't arrive.
  • I called her but she didn't answer her phone I was desperate and I was going crazy.
  • What was happened?
  • What did I make her?
  • That afternoon I asked my sister for her and she said me: -bro, she went to USA today -What?
  • She went where?- I am sorry- and gave me a paper- it's a note for you- I opened the note and read: I love you so much.
  • I am sick and I need to go to another country for help.
  • My chain was of my mother who died last year.
  • She had cancer and I...Me too my Thomas.
  • I am afraid I going to die too.
  • Thank for your tenderness, You made my life better.
  • I have to admit that you like me, I will always love your smile.
  • That is why, now I don't want to die.
  • I going to fight for you.
  • That sad and cold day of November I didn't say goodbye Caroline, from that day I...
  • I don’t know what about me yet.
  • I am just waiting for another note.

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