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    • Review for a new section in a magazine called “great TV programs around the world”.
    • Hi everybody, today I’d like to participate to this new section and share my opinion about my best TV show.
    • I’m writing you from Paris and here my favorites programs are all the real TV show.
    • I know this is very particularly controversial but I really love it because it is always funny and crazy.
    • I watch all about it on every topics and channels.
    • But I’m an adult and I know it is often only fiction and not the real life or natural situations.
    • Even if candidates follow a script, it doesn’t matter because the program will be better, a little bit like a movie.
    • I have never tried to copy a candidate or let a program influence my life, I have strength of mine and I love my simple life so I never want to have their crazy life… Nevertheless, I’m aware that these programs could hurt some children or teenagers because young people might not make any difference between real life and the life shown on the TV.
    • And furthermore, some people have a strong laugh at some candidates, and criticism harshly to them.

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    • Even if candidates follow a script, it doesn’t matter because the program will be better, a little bit like a movie.
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    • Even if candidatethe participants follow a script, it doesn’t really matter because the programme will be better, a little bit like a movie.
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    • I have never tried to copy a candidate or let a program influence my life, I have strength of mine and I love my simple life so I never want to have their crazy life… Nevertheless, I’m aware that these programs could hurt some children or teenagers because young people might not make any difference between real life and the life shown on the TV.
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    • And furthermore, some people have a strong laugh at some candidates, and criticism harshly to them.
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