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Scriptum ab Eurekara - English

    • My grandma death

  • Hello everybody.
    • I got no interesting topic so I'm gonna talk about my grandma , who died a few days ago . she was a strong woman , as my mother gave me birth when she was at university , my grandmother took care of me during almost all my childhood .
    • I wasn't alone , because all of her grand-children was with her .She use to call me baby Bobo, because my third name start by "Bo".
  • I remember our days , we would play during long hours , and she always cleaned after us .
  • At that time we didn't care about her health , we use to believe that she was immortal and that she would stay with us until the end of time.
  • But when we got the age of 13 and more for some of us , and that each one went to his home, we stopped to see her everyday , but just the Sunday .
  • And step by step , we left her alone in his empty big house .
  • The desease started to live with her , and the woman who ran after us to make us tidy up our toys couldn't walk anymore .
  • 6 months later , a heart attack made that she couldn't talk well .
  • We were sad for her , because ...
  • I think you can understand that it is not easy for child to see somebody loved in this state .
  • 3 years later , 29th november 2013 .
  • My aunt call my mother with urgency , because my grandma didn't go well and that she was at hospital .
  • We were used to hear that she was at hospital because of all her deseases , but this time it was serious.
  • The afternoon , my sister and I were watching TV , laughing and we received a call .
  • My mother , with these exact words : Your grandma is tired . Get ready. It was all .
  • You know , i have a great respect for my sister because she never cry whatever what happen , she never cry; but that day a tear felle down from his left eye , she looked at me and we cried together .
  • After that moment , we continued our activity. and an old man , a friend of my mother came at home , he said : you know children , life is a chain , people come and people go , we must not cry , this is the world and the plans that God made for us that we are following.
  • I couldn't listen more to him , I ran with all my energy and I screamt again and again , i didn't believe it .
  • I went back home , my sister was laid down on the floor, crying ; I understood that it was real .
  • Now , i have many regrets , because we forgot her , we left her alone and she died alone .
  • I remeber now that we forgot to party for his 62th birthday.
  • It is too late.

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