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  • A short story

  • Alison read the note, smiled, and immediately put on her coat.
    • She got out the home in a hurry and took her key’s car.
    • Unfortunately, she met his neighbor: a helder strange man, he always need company, his family let him alone all the year.
    • Alison have had already stayed with him some long afternoon, just to listen old stories and to give him the impression to get someone who visit him.
    • It wasn’t a strange man when you know his deep sadness, Alison thought.
  • But this day and especially at this moment, she hadn’t got enough time to give a shoulder to lean.
    • She ran quickly to reach the elevator, went straight without pay attention for him.
  • The old man was totally disappointed, and Alison would have been able to read the despair on his face.
  • instead of it, without a glance at him, she was smiling, thinking about the note.

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