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Scriptum ab AngelaZZ - English

  • The White Heron(Adaption)

    • He has never returned since he went away that day, even if I can still hear the sound of his whistle as I come home with my grandmother’s cow.
    • “Am I wrong?” I can’t help asking myself after his leaving.
    • I moved from a dirty, crowded factory town to my grandmother’s home after being chosen to help her on her farm in Vermont.
  • It is my job to bring our cow home to be milked.
  • One day, I spent longer time than usual to find my cow.
    • When I waited the cow to drink, I put my bare feet in the cold, fresh water of the stream.
    • It was my first time that I had been alone in the forest as late like this.
  • The air was soft and sweet, and the silver leaves were moving in the evening breeze; I felt as if I was a part of the gray shadows.
  • It was such a lovely place, and I really enjoyed being here.
  • After the cow finished drinking, I hurried to home again.
  • Suddenly, the air was cut by a sharp whistle not far away.
  • I was so frightened that I hid in some bushes, but it was too late.
  • A young man greeted me and asked how far it is to the main road.
  • “Two miles,” I whispered with trembling voice and came out of the bushes.
  • He explained he had been hunting for birds but lost his way, and asked if he can spend the night at my home.
  • When we reached home, my grandmother agreed with a smile and provided dishes for him.
  • “Sylvie knows a lot about birds, too,” my grandmother said it proudly after he explained he was a scientist, who collected birds.
  • So he asked me to help him to find out a tall, strange bird with soft white feathers and long thin legs.
  • My heart began to beat fast after he said that.
  • I had seen that birds before!
  • “I would give ten dollars to the person who showed me where the white heron is,” he added. Ten dollars!
  • That’s really a great deal for me.
  • I’m so excited that all night my dreams were full of the wonderful things I and my grandmother could buy for ten dollars.
  • We spent the next day in the forest and he told me a lot about the birds we saw.
  • I couldn’t understand why he killed the birds he seemed to like so much.
  • I felt my heart tremble every time he shot an unsuspecting bird as it was singing in the trees.
  • But I still watched him with an unknown excitement; he was such a charming and lovely guy.
  • We drove home together, but I didn’t fall asleep that night.
  • I came up early the next morning, quietly left the house and hurried through the forest.
  • I climbed hard to the top of a huge pine tree, from which I could see the whole forest.
  • Suddenly I caught a flash of white that grew larger and larger.
  • A bird with broad white wings and a long slender neck flew past me and landed on a pine branch below me.
  • I knew the wild bird’s secret now.
  • I began my trip down the tree, and tried to forget my fingers hurt and my feet were bleeding.
  • All I wanted to think about was to tell him where the heron’s nest is.
  • However, I was silent when my angry grandmother asked me where I had been.
  • I kept silent when I caught his kind eyes.
  • I didn’t want to let him down, but I just couldn’t say a word!
  • The fresh air, the clear water, the sliver leaves, the melodious birds…All the beauty kept appearing before my eyes.
  • They were so priceless that even 10 dollars couldn’t buy, and I really didn’t want to see anyone destroy it.
  • I’m sad about his leaving, but I know I’ve made the right choice.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English