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- Travel how wonderful it is
- One of my favorites things to do is to travel.
- Traveling is something that you have to spend money (much of this times a lot of money) but I think this, make you richier.
- If I won the lottery (or won a lot of money) I would travel around the world for the rest of my life.

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- Travel how wonderful it is
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- ~~Travel h~~How wonderful i~~t is~~s traveling?
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- Travel, how wonderful it is!
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- One of my favorites things to do is to travel.
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- OTraveling is one of my favorites things to do ~~is to travel~~.
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- Traveling is something that you have to spend money (much of this times a lot of money) but I think this, make you richier.
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- ~~Traveling is something that you have to spend money (much of this times a lot of money) but I think this, make you richier.~~Unfortunate, traveling can be very costly but you gain a lot of knowledge and you became a more cultured person.
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- If I won the lottery (or won a lot of money) I would travel around the world for the rest of my life.
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- If I won the lottery ~~(or won a lot of money)~~, or became wealthy, I would travel around the world for the rest of my life.
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