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    • I have to write a text for school, in English and I would like to know if what I did is good or not, tell me what you think !
  • :) Subject : Would you like to take part in reality TV programme ?
  • Why or why not ?
    • I would not want to take part in a reality TV programme because, to my mind, private life is not everybody’s business and I would not want my private life to be broadcast in the whole world.
    • Moreover, this kind of programme bothers me because I don’t see what is interesting : we only see strangers in their daily life, doing stuff without any interest and I don’t want to be in the spotlight for doing nothing special.
    • I would not want people to know me thanks to a stupid show that would made me famous.
    • Furthermore, I think I would not be happy to see my face everyday on a media coverage and being recognized by everybody would be irritating and bothering and then, I could not just walk in the street quietly because people that took part in reality TV programme became famous and people want to take pictures with them and I think I could not stand it.
    • Well, glory of people who took part is such programme is short-lived and quickly, they become again unknown so reality TV is useless.

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    • I have to write a text for school, in English and I would like to know if what I did is good or not, tell me what you think !
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    • I would not want to take part in a reality TV programme because, to my mind, private life is not everybody’s business and I would not want my private life to be broadcast in the whole world.
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    • I would not want to take partparticipate in a reality TV programme because, to my mind, private life is not everybody’s business and I would not want& also don't want to broadcast my private life to the whole world because, as per mye private life to be broadcast in the whole worldis not to be an entertainment.
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    • I would not want to take part in a reality TV programme because, to my mind,e, my private life is not everybody’other people's business. and I would not want my private life to be broadcast into the whole world.
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    • Moreover, this kind of programme bothers me because I don’t see what is interesting : we only see strangers in their daily life, doing stuff without any interest and I don’t want to be in the spotlight for doing nothing special.
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    • Moreover, this kind of programme bothers me because I don’'t see whatfind ist interesting : we only. We see strangers in their daily life, doing stuff without any interest andboring stuff. I don’t want to be in the spotlight for doing nothing specialordinary things.
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    • Furthermore, I think I would not be happy to see my face everyday on a media coverage and being recognized by everybody would be irritating and bothering and then, I could not just walk in the street quietly because people that took part in reality TV programme became famous and people want to take pictures with them and I think I could not stand it.
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    • Furthermore, I think I would not be happy to see my face everyday on a media coverage and being recognized by everybody would be irritating and bothering and then, I could not just walk in the street quietly because people that took akepart in reality TV programmes becaome famous and people want to take pictures with them and I don't think I could not stand it.
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    • Furthermore, I don't think I would not be happy to see my face everyday on ain media coverage and. Also, being recognized by everybody would be irritating and bothering and then,other and irritate me as I could not just walk idown the street quietly because p. People that tookake part in reality TV programmes became famous and peopleget harassed by fans wanting to take pictures with them and I. I don't think I could not stand it.
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    • Well, glory of people who took part is such programme is short-lived and quickly, they become again unknown so reality TV is useless.
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    • Well, glorythe fame of people who tookake part isn such programmeshows is short-lived, and quickly, they become again unknown sos soon they are forgotten; so even for that reality TV is useless.
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    • Well, gloryThe fame of people who tookake part isn such programmes is short-lived and they quickly, they become again unknown soagain thus making reality TV is useless.
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