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    • Mini Essay: Why is Important Study at Home with Parents?

  • In my opinion, pupils should learn at home, after lessons at school.
    • Study at home is important, because a family member could help to understand a subject clearly.
    • As result the young could pay more attention to their study.
    • To compare two types of education, teachers are using an average level of class members for studying, but the parents do not.
    • Therefor sometimes at school pupils do not understand topic and lose interest in studying.
  • At home the situation is different, because the parents could know the needs of child and make the process of learning plainer and simpler.
    • Another problem with study at school is distraction factors.
  • It can be the noise of speaking or aggression from other children.
  • At home the level of distraction is significantly lower, of course with their parents help.
    • In addition, the memory of children is not perfect and review at home helps them remind and remember subject for the long time.
    • In conclusion, children should always study at home with someone who could support them with the process of education.
    • It could makes the learning easily and understandable.

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