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  • 20131208

    • Dear dairy today is my second time to write here.
    • these days i see a korean teleplay, its about love and kindness.the artness can see the ghost.she always help the ghost get the wishes.even she cant do herself.
  • too kindness is it a good thing? in my company, maybe it is not good,or even in china.people think u r easy to talk and cheat, they will say U CANT DO THIS.regulation in china is not perfect,we can find some holes in it, or break it.
  • people in china is self-importance. sometimes they maybe say some words who dont like.
  • recently, maybe it havent rained for a long times, so we had smoggy here.we cant see the building at the other side .the flight was delaied or canlced.our company suply us two respirators.SO COURTEOUS...they will not give us two days to rest.

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    • these days i see a korean teleplay, its about love and kindness.the artness can see the ghost.she always help the ghost get the wishes.even she cant do herself.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • these days i seeI have been watching a kKorean teleplay, itsoap opera. It's about love and kindness.the artness can see the ghost.s She always helps the ghost get the wishes.even she cant do herself.
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      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
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    • too kindness is it a good thing? in my company, maybe it is not good,or even in china.people think u r easy to talk and cheat, they will say U CANT DO THIS.regulation in china is not perfect,we can find some holes in it, or break it.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3
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    • recently, maybe it havent rained for a long times, so we had smoggy here.we cant see the building at the other side .the flight was delaied or canlced.our company suply us two respirators.SO COURTEOUS...they will not give us two days to rest.
      Pilih sekarang juga!
    • TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5