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- I didn't attend this webside a long time!
- English is important with me but I only speak a little.
- I should learn English more seriously Who is someone you admire that speak more than one language? Now!
- Start learning another language today!

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- I didn't attend this webside a long time!
  투표하세요!
- I ~~didn't at~~t has been a long time since I last visitend this websi~~de a long time!~~te.
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문장 1
- English is important with me but I only speak a little.
  투표하세요!
- English is important ~~with me but~~to me, I only speak a little.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
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- I should learn English more seriously Who is someone you admire that speak more than one language? Now!
  투표하세요!
- I should spend more time learning English ~~more seriously¶ Who is someone you admire that~~/I should take my learning more seriously.¶Is there someone who speaks more than one language? whom you admire? Now!
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- ~~I should learn English~~To improve my English I need to take my studying more seriously¶. Who ~~is someone~~do you admire ~~that~~who speaks more than one language~~? Now!~~ today?
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
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- Start learning another language today!
  투표하세요!
- ~~Start l~~Begin your journey today. Learn~~ing~~ another language ~~today!~~.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3