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Too much information on the Internet will cause problems.
- Last Sunday I was suffering the Internet, I searched myself for fun.
- However something beyond my imagination happened.
- I found that my personal information is all on the Internet.
- It is all private.
- Suddenly, I realized that the Internet is both convenient and dangerous.
- I completely agree too much information creates problems.
- Fist of all, the risk is the uncertainty of our own security.
- Imaging that if your personal information such as your house address, your phone number and even your ID are pose on the Internet and everyone can get it without your awareness.
- What a horrible thing!
- Maybe It is incredible but it is truly happening.
- I read news about people against the Google get into their gmail for some date using.
- Because they think Google does harm to their privacy.
- This may be more concern about the credit thing.
- But on the other hand, if there are not so such personal information on the Internet (including our e-mails).Even Google gets into the Gmail .The information will be ok.
- Furthermore, we are more depend on the Internet than before, which causes we will use the error information from Internet without critical thinking.
- Just let me give you a simple example, when the professor gives us an assignment, like paper or presentation.
- The first avenue comes into my mind is Internet.
- Once I was finding information about Mr. Zhang, who is the director of the most popular carton drama in China.
- I was surprised by the news that he was passed away.
- And I found a bunch of the similar news. I trusted it.
- However, the news eventually turned out fake.
- And Mr. Zhang was interviewed by local newspaper.
- Since then I started to think a little bit more before I believe the information on the Internet.
- The last but not least, the information on the Internet has no limitation, some of them will lead the young to criminals.
- As we all know, the young are not able to control their behavior completely.
- They will attract by the strange ideas.
- They even will mimic the behavior of characters in the films, such as violence.
- So the films have limit.
- What about Internet?
- When they surfing the Internet, there is no boundary.
- It is pretty dangerous.
- To recap, taking into account all the factors, we can draw the conclusion that too much information will cause problems.
- My suggestion is that more people from all walks of life should be encouraged to protect the environment of Internet.
- Only in this way we have a better and brighter future.
- kakakagaba
December 2013
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