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    • the price of the petrol

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    • Humans invite new products and equipment every day which play a vital role in facilitating our daily life.
    • Every product undergoes different chains of complicated procedures and the main component is used to complete them is the “petrol” which cause environment pollution when it convert to vibration that exhale from cars and chimneys’ factories.
    • This vibration contains carbon, neutron and other poison elements.
    • Some people believe that the significant solution of environment pollution is increasing the price of the petrol but I think this solution will affect negatively on poor people only, but wealthy people can offer the price and consume the same amount of petrol for their factories and cars, furthermore , they will increase the price of their product as a result of increasing the petrol price ,the poor people will be compelled to accept buying their needs with the high price although they face difficulties to offer it.
    • And I believe the best solution is to find the alternative source of energy such as electric, hydropower and solar energy and encourage nations to use them by legislating a new law to decrease the insurance on products that use these types of energy or to allow to people who use them to receive a government subsidy and I insist that the best way to solve the growing traffic is to extend the streets.
    • I have been to the capital city of Qatar “Dawha” last week and I noticed that this busy city never suffers of traffic jam because of its wide streets pavement.

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    • Every product undergoes different chains of complicated procedures and the main component is used to complete them is the “petrol” which cause environment pollution when it convert to vibration that exhale from cars and chimneys’ factories.
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    • Everyach new product undergoes different chains of complicated procedures and the mainmay involve many complicated processes but the compmonent is used to complete them is the “petrol” which cause thread is that they all use “petrol” during one or more stages of development. Downside of the use of petrol is well documented, environmental pollution when it convert to vibrationprimarily from thate exhale fromust of cars and chimneys’ factoriefactory smokestacks.
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    • Some people believe that the significant solution of environment pollution is increasing the price of the petrol but I think this solution will affect negatively on poor people only, but wealthy people can offer the price and consume the same amount of petrol for their factories and cars, furthermore , they will increase the price of their product as a result of increasing the petrol price ,the poor people will be compelled to accept buying their needs with the high price although they face difficulties to offer it.
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    • Some people believe that the significantone solution tof environmental pollution is to increasinge the price of the petrol but I think this solution will affect negatively on poor people only, but weal. Of course this will not deter the wealthy from buying petrol but only hurt thye people can offer the price and consume the same amount of petrol for their factories and cars, furthermore , they will increaoor. Not only will it effect the poor's ability to buy petrol but will cause the price of theirall product as a result of increasing the petrol price ,the poor people will be compelled to accept buying their needs with the high price although they face difficulties to offer its that rely on petrol in production or for transportation to markets to increase in price.
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    • And I believe the best solution is to find the alternative source of energy such as electric, hydropower and solar energy and encourage nations to use them by legislating a new law to decrease the insurance on products that use these types of energy or to allow to people who use them to receive a government subsidy and I insist that the best way to solve the growing traffic is to extend the streets.
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    • And I believe tThe best solution is to find theto reduce environmental pollution would involve a combination of alternative source of energy such asources, electric, -hydropower and, solar energy and encourage nations to use them by legislating a new law to decrease the insurance on products that use these types of energy or to allow to people who use them to rece, wind farms and even nuclear power. Encouraging nation states to use alternative sources of energy can be achieved through legislation, tax incentives a government subsidy and I insist that the best way to solve the growing traffic is to extend the streetsnd energy credits to their people and companies that use them.
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    • I have been to the capital city of Qatar “Dawha” last week and I noticed that this busy city never suffers of traffic jam because of its wide streets pavement.
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    • I have been toVisiting the capital city of Qatar “Dawha” last week and I noticed that this busy city nevertling city did not suffers of traffic jam because of its wide streets pavements the streets were more than adequate to handle the traffic. ¶
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