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  • planting

  • Life is full of curiosity.
  • I got this idea when I was 7 years old.
    • Before that, for me, life was not so amazing and I was not as energetic as what I am now.
  • I still remember I always played with myself, reluctant to go out with peers.
  • In my heart, it was childish to fool around with nothing done.
  • Lying on the bed, my body was in a relaxed state, looking out side through the window.
  • Behind our house, there was a bamboo forest.
  • The breeze swept across it, they shook back and forth.
  • Under this peaceful atmosphere, I was quieter than ever.
  • This made me different from other active kids.
  • And grandma decided to take me outside to try something else.
    • That day, my grandma took me to the vegetable garden and taught me to how to plant.
    • “Grandma, why you teach me this?
  • Does it make sense?” I asked.
    • “ life is mysterious and the nature empower the plants with indescribable magic power.
    • I want you to get something from this, from them.
    • Take a look around you, dear.” She replied. every thing looked so energetic under the green cover.
    • Natural cream extracted from plants and flowers brings your eye a color full of life energy.
  • The sunshine spread from the blue sky dotted by several clouds.
    • “let’s begin our journey today.” I crossed the field to our destination and the yellow and brown soil catch my eyes very conspicuous In a large green color.
    • When I came close, I could see the Ants swarming up out of the ground and handling food.
  • Some of the unknown vegetables dished out and looked very cute chattering all the time as if they were smiling.
  • Green vines climbing out of the fence.
  • I squat, learning from grandmother to loose the soil and turning over the small piece of land back and forth.
    • Under my grandmother's help, I dug holes with the shovel and put the seeds in.
    • Then in this rectangular land, using my sweaty hand did the same step repeatedly.
    • The fair hair that clustered round my forehead was damp with perspiration.
  • She gently pushed a lock of my sweat-drenched hair out of my forehead.
    • I stood up straight occasionally, and relax aching body.
    • The sweat fell constantly from my head, cheek and neck, reflecting the sunshine like diamonds.
  • I had to bend down for a long time to finish my work.
    • In the course of doing this, every seed grown by myself looked so important and beautiful, although the process was not so pleasant.
  • When I finished it, the land looked sweet and attractive.
  • After that, I ran to the pond for water.
  • A flock of ducks was swimming freely.
    • The pond was surrounded with slim willow.
    • I got half a bucket of water and go back.
    • The water drops in my naked feet give me an itch like that I stepped on the grass along the walkway of garden.
    • That night, I had a comfortable shower and sound sleep.
  • The next days, I always go out to look them for I was eager to expect them growing up.
    • Day by day, I almost lose patience since it has no change and there is no sign to sprout on the flat land.
  • “Don’t worry! honey.
  • Life will give you a surprise in carelessly.” Grand told me.
  • Her words gave me some hints and drove me .Of course, I went on my daily activity to observe them.
    • One foggy morning, I found a little green in a piece of yellow, it quivering, like a new born baby opened its curious eyes.
  • A moving sense from the bottom of my heart welled up.
  • Let my eyes colored the beauty.
  • I ran back told grandma what I saw.
  • She said: “it is good to see the green growing up through your hands, though the waiting may be unbearable.
  • You will find another power in the nature and it will transmit to you.” The fruit after waiting tasted much sweeter.
  • Moreover, I fell in love with planting.
  • I tried to plant flowers and trees to dot my house and sent them to others.
  • Let them share with me which in turn made me happier.
  • After that morning, with the seeds budding one after another, the indescribable feeling moved me.
  • I gradually understand what grandma said.
  • At that minute, life looked so colorful.
  • It’s natural miracle as I was the one who gave a witness.
  • Yes, life was full of curiosity and colorful as long as you put heart into it.

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