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- Using of 3D Printers
- Some of this uses are dangerous.
- They could print a complete weapon such as Knifes or guns.
- I am afraid, If the government consider that printers as a dangerous machine.
- On the other hand, they could print very useful things.
- I found in the Internet that the scientists fabricated a very small battery that I can use in Laptop or mobile phone by using this printer.
- I watch a news report on Fox News that a Father built prosthesis for his child and it cost only ten dollars.
- This is the link of this report (http://goo.gl/WDirft ).

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- Some of this uses are dangerous.
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- They could print a complete weapon such as Knifes or guns.
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- I am afraid, If the government consider that printers as a dangerous machine.
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- On the other hand, they could print very useful things.
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- I found in the Internet that the scientists fabricated a very small battery that I can use in Laptop or mobile phone by using this printer.
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- I watch a news report on Fox News that a Father built prosthesis for his child and it cost only ten dollars.
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- I watched a news report on Fox News ~~tha~~about a Father who built a prosthe~~sis~~tic for his child ~~and i~~that cost only ten dollars.
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- This is the link of this report (http://goo.gl/WDirft ).
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