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  • My biggest failure

    • My biggest failure was not being selected in show organized by national channl, for golden pen (A good writer).
    • I was 18 years old, and I had this dream to become a famous writer.
    • I was very sad because I was not selected, I thought that my novel was not original, but now, I am glad, it didn't work because after that I have improved my skills on writing more, by reading a lot of books, and writing a lot of short stories.

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    • I was very sad because I was not selected, I thought that my novel was not original, but now, I am glad, it didn't work because after that I have improved my skills on writing more, by reading a lot of books, and writing a lot of short stories.
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    • I was very sad because I was not selected, I thought that my novel was not original, but now, I am glad, it didn't work because after that I have improved my skills on writing moreskills, by reading a lot of books, and writing a lot of short stories.
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    • I was very sad because I was not selected,. I thought that my novel was not original, but now,. But I am glad, that it didn't work because after that I have improved my skills on writing more,skills by reading a lot of books, and writing a lot of short stories.
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