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HI!
- I'm Mattia, i want learn english, so with your help i hope to it!:D

vipermatJanuary 2013100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- I'm Mattia, i want learn english, so with your help i hope to it!:D
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- I'm Mattia, i want to learn english, so ~~with your help i hope to i~~i hope that you can help me with that!:D
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- I'm Mattia, iI want to learn eEnglish~~, so with your help i hope to it!~~. I hope you will help me to do that. :D
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