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My town
- If my town was to retell who set foot on its territory, it would make a long story.

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- If my town was to retell who set foot on its territory, it would make a long story.
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- If a person from my town was to retell ~~who~~the story of everyone who has set foot on its territory, ithey would ~~make~~tell a long story.
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