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- Yesterday the Pediatric Surgery has begun.
- I saw a newborn in reanimation without any chance of survival...
She is only one day old. life is cruel, isn't it?

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- Yesterday the Pediatric Surgery has begun.
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- I saw a newborn in reanimation without any chance of survival...
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- I saw a newborn in ~~reanimation~~an incubator without any chance of survival...
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