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  • write an essay about similarities and differences between high

  • As you know, in order to attend to university in vietnam is not so easy.
  • On arriving at beginning academic life at university that makes you difficult.
  • Because learning style at a high school and a university is not completely identical.
  • It is the only similarity that is your effort in studying.
  • And we are easy to realize differences between high school and university style include the student's self-awareness, lecturer's methods.
  • The students in both high school and university must attempt to study.
  • Otherwise you will always fail in the exams and not make progress.
  • All education environment, your effort is most important.
  • If you do not try your best to study, you will be always a loser whether you are genius or not.
  • The most different between high school and university is student's self-awareness.
  • The only thing that you do at high school is listening and writing down because they just learn basic knowledge, so their self-awareness is quite low.
  • Whereas you must study by yourselves at university.
  • Because of the large of students, lectures cannot be concerned with all.
  • Therefore, one-hundred percent of success belongs sixty percent of your self-awareness.
  • You continue development or stop it, all is your decision.
  • At high school, you learn by listening and understanding the information by your teachers.
  • There are more than fifty students but only one teacher and most of your studying occurs inside the classroom.
  • You just sit there listening and writing down everything from teacher.
  • So you need not think much and the brain is rarely used.
  • In addition, you also become passive more since you just learn by heart to recite your lesson for teacher as well as for fifteen term test.
  • On the other hand, you are required to think critically and logical when you study at university. you must learn independently to increase source of knowledge because lecturers do not compel your studying as like at high school.
  • A significant amount of study takes place outside the lecture theatres, so you have to study anything on your own under lecturer's direction.

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