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    • my car accident

    • ago, three months, i had a car accident. often, the question that people ask me: how didn't you see the truck? i didn't see.
    • here is the story: it was 1 P.M and I had an appointment for my ears in a hospital in brussels. i recorded my GPS in my home but it didn't find the address.
    • I took the road anyway when my GPS found the street in hospital.
    • i think now, that i saw my GPS during too time. suddenly, i saw in front me and boum. i didn't have time to think about death, just i will have an accident! i closed my eyes and when i opened it, i was stop and was alone.
    • then, a man came beside me and he was standing with me. he was speak with me and he was help me. i was stand 1 week in the hospital in charleroi. when i was return in my home, i searched this man for thank him. but i didn't find.
  • 1 week too late, the traffic police came in my home for my statement and i asked him if he had the phone number this man. but the police man didn't know it! but he had a phone number the person who called the police, the day of my accident. i was sad thatit didn't him! i was call to say thank you for when i surprised, this was him. his name is Frederic, during this call, i was crying when i told him thank you. i was, i'm really happy talked to him and thank him.
    • i hope again to see him a day!

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    • here is the story: it was 1 P.M and I had an appointment for my ears in a hospital in brussels. i recorded my GPS in my home but it didn't find the address.
      Glasajte sada!
    • ¶hereThis is the story:¶it was 1 P.M and I had an appointment for my ears in a hospital in bBrussels. iI had recorded my GPS in my home but it didn't find the address.
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    • ¶here is thI'll tell you the whole story:¶iIt was 1 P.M. and I had an appointment for my earswith an ENT in a hospital in bBrussels. i recordI used my GPS in my home at home to try and find the address but it didn't find ithe address.
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    • i think now, that i saw my GPS during too time. suddenly, i saw in front me and boum. i didn't have time to think about death, just i will have an accident! i closed my eyes and when i opened it, i was stop and was alone.
      Glasajte sada!
    • ¶i think now, that i saw my GPS during too time.Thinking back, I believe I might have been looking at my GPS when the accident happened. All of a suddenly, iI saw the truck in front of me and boum. i didn't haveBOOM! I had no time to think about death, just i will have an accident! i closed my eyes and when i opened it, i was stop and was alone.the only thought in my mind was, "That truck is going to hit me!"
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    • then, a man came beside me and he was standing with me. he was speak with me and he was help me. i was stand 1 week in the hospital in charleroi. when i was return in my home, i searched this man for thank him. but i didn't find.
      Glasajte sada!
    • ¶then, a man came beside me and he was standing with me. he was speak with me and he was help me. i was stand 1The next thing I remember is a man standing beside me talking to me. He was asking if I was alright and telling me he would help me get to the hospital. I spent a week in thea hospital bed in cCharleroi. when i wasUpon return in myg home, i searched this man for thank him. but i didn't findI tried to locate the man that had helped me in order to thank him, to no avail.
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    • 1 week too late, the traffic police came in my home for my statement and i asked him if he had the phone number this man. but the police man didn't know it! but he had a phone number the person who called the police, the day of my accident. i was sad thatit didn't him! i was call to say thank you for when i surprised, this was him. his name is Frederic, during this call, i was crying when i told him thank you. i was, i'm really happy talked to him and thank him.
      Glasajte sada!
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