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  • November 21st.

  • Today is Thursday, November 21st.
    • Last night, a man checking the cellphone while he was walking home, in that momento, men were riding on her bicycles and talk over the cold night.
  • I saw those because after my mommy came home, and said to me a great notice.
    • Now I watching the television a man that stole her bestfriend's girlfriend, while I'm looking a notebook, where I wrote my personals things.
    • This morning, I scared, because in that moment I don't know where is the key of the lock of my locker.
    • Khelia are the baby most beautifull and noke that I knows, I want send to her a pijama, but it's very expensive do it.
  • I like the speed, my copine don't like it, last Friday, my sister take me and we want to the sister soccer match and later I drove the car in the highway 'cause my sister injury her leg, and I must did it.
    • I'm littler bigger that my little brother and my sister is the biggest among all three.

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    • Last night, a man checking the cellphone while he was walking home, in that momento, men were riding on her bicycles and talk over the cold night.
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    • Last night, a man checking theed his cellphone while he was walking home, in. At that momento,time, then mean wereas riding on herhis bicycles and talk overing in the cold night.
      PannkakorPannkakor profile picture 댓글 1
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    • Last night, a man was checking the cellhis mobile phone while he was walking home, in. At that momento, men werethere man was riding on heris bicycles and talk over the cold night.
      aagaag profile picture 댓글 1
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    • Now I watching the television a man that stole her bestfriend's girlfriend, while I'm looking a notebook, where I wrote my personals things.
      투표하세요!
    • Now I'm looking at notebook and writing my personal things while watching the television where a man thatd stolen her bestfriend's girlfriend, while I'm looking a notebook, where I wrote my personals things.
      myname1myname1 profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
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    • This morning, I scared, because in that moment I don't know where is the key of the lock of my locker.
      투표하세요!
    • TI scared this morning, I scared, because in that momentbecause I doidn't know where iwas the key ofrom the lock of my locker.
      myname1myname1 profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
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    • Khelia are the baby most beautifull and noke that I knows, I want send to her a pijama, but it's very expensive do it.
      투표하세요!
    • Khelia areis the baby most beautifull and noke thatcoolest person I knows, I want to send to her a pijama, but it's very expensive to do it.
      myname1myname1 profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
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    • I like the speed, my copine don't like it, last Friday, my sister take me and we want to the sister soccer match and later I drove the car in the highway 'cause my sister injury her leg, and I must did it.
      투표하세요!
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    • I'm littler bigger that my little brother and my sister is the biggest among all three.
      투표하세요!
    • I'm littler bigga bit older thaten my little brother and my sister is the biggestoldest person among allthe three of us.
      myname1myname1 profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
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