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    • My name is Adolfo, i'm from México, i was born in Mexico city but when i was a child my parents moved to Veracruz.
    • Veracruz is a interesting state because it has a lot of regions very different, since a warn and hot from the beach to the could and raining weather from the mountain.
    • In my childhood i lived in Poza Rica.
    • Poza Rica is a city that was found for the petroleum.
    • Now the city don't have much petroleum, but the national company "Petroleos Mexicanos" has a very important infrastructure in this zone from the other cities even others states.
    • Right now i live in a city called Tampico from the neighboring state of Tamaulipas .
    • Here i studied architecture in the "Universidad Autónoma de Tamaulipas".
    • I live with my sister called Maureen Elisa and my cat "Max".
    • I have 5 years living here and now i plan move to Mexico city (the city where all began).
    • I hope learn english and french, but i don't have any idea from french, even one of my dreams is to know this wonderful city.
    • Well for now is all, thank you for read this and correct me.
    • I wish to don't be a headache for everybody.

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    • My name is Adolfo, i'm from México, i was born in Mexico city but when i was a child my parents moved to Veracruz.
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    • My name is Adolfo, i'm from Méexico, i was born in Mexico city but when i was a child my parents moved to Veracruz.
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    • My name is Adolfo, i'm from Méexico, iI was born in Mexico city but when iI was a child my parents moved to Veracruz.
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    • My name is Adolfo, i and I'm from Méexico, i. I was born in Mexico cCity but when iI was a child my parents moved to Veracruz.
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    • My name is Adolfo, iI'm from México, i and I was born in Mexico cCity but when Ii was a child my parents moved to Veracruz.
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    • Veracruz is a interesting state because it has a lot of regions very different, since a warn and hot from the beach to the could and raining weather from the mountain.
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    • Veracruz is an interesting state because it has a lot of regions very different, since amany different regions, from the warnm and hot from the beaches to the could and raining weather from they mountains.
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    • Veracruz is a interesting state because it has a lot of regions very different, since regions, from a warnm and hot fromweather of the beaches to the could and rainingy weather ofrom the mountains.
      diehd123diehd123 profile picture 댓글
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    • Now the city don't have much petroleum, but the national company "Petroleos Mexicanos" has a very important infrastructure in this zone from the other cities even others states.
      투표하세요!
    • Now the city don't have much petroleum, but the national company "Petroleos Mexicanos" has a very important infrastructure in this zone fromto the other cities even others states.
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    • Nowadays the city doesn't have much petroleum, but the national company "Petroleos Mexicanos" has a very important infrastructure in this zone fromarea that supplies the other cities and even others states.
      ScarfaciusScarfacius profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
    • Now the city doesn't have much petroleum, but the national company "Petroleos Mexicanos" has a very important infrastructure in this zone from thebuilt for other cities and even others states.
      diehd123diehd123 profile picture 댓글
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    • I have 5 years living here and now i plan move to Mexico city (the city where all began).
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    • I have 5 yearsbeen living here andfor 5 years, but now i plan to move to Mexico city (the city where it all began).
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    • I have 5 yearsbeen living here andfor 5 years, but now iI plan to move to Mexico cCity (the city where it all began).
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    • I hope learn english and french, but i don't have any idea from french, even one of my dreams is to know this wonderful city.
      투표하세요!
    • I hope to learn eEnglish and fFrench, but iI don't have any idea from fabout French, even one of my dreams is to know this wonderful citountry.
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