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    • The star. Esther Claes

    • The text under discussion, called “The star”, written by Esther Claes an American write, known for his shot stories.
    • It tells about a young star who doesn’t believe in doomsday.
    • The world starts to end.
    • There are diseases and radiation poisoning spreading all over the world.
    • The star's parents try to bring you back to reality.
    • They are very sick, but she doesn’t go out to you room and thinks that tomorrow will be ok.
    • The atmosphere of the text is depressive, tragic and frightening, because people are death, cities are destroyed.
    • We see a girl who is raising star and face off death.
    • We don’t know name and age this girl, because she as well as all people afraid of doomsday.
    • We join to the emotional stresses and fears of the young star.
    • She is very young, talent and successful, has a dream, believes in future, but whole the world is destroyed.
    • Her parents are afraid of what tomorrow would bring to them.
    • They uncover whole horrors of war and try to invite her attention to reality over and over, but their daughter believes that LA can’t be destroyed.
    • The girl is scare, but her parents don’t help her.
    • Her parents look to be helped from daughter, but why they don’t want appease her?
    • Taking care of their parents before now she doesn’t yet

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