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My arrival in Ireland
- I have been arrived since two weeks ago in Ireland to do an internship.
- I'm leaving to Limerick in South-West of Ireland and I share my accommodation with two french boys.
- I try to visit something every week-end because with my internship I am free saturday and sunday.
- Probably I will come to Galway next week-end.
- After to come in Ireland I was afraid didn't meet people and speak english but now I really happy to be here.
- Nevertheless, my family and my friends are from France miss they.
- I come back in France the 20th December only.
- Thanks to read me. Bye bye ;)

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- I have been arrived since two weeks ago in Ireland to do an internship.
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- I ~~have been~~ arrived since Ireland two weeks ago ~~in Ireland~~ to do an internship.
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- I ~~have been arrived since two weeks ago in Ireland to do~~came to Ireland two weeks ago for an internship.
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- I'm leaving to Limerick in South-West of Ireland and I share my accommodation with two french boys.
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- I'm leaving tofor Limerick in the South-West of Ireland and I will share my accommodation with two fFrench boys.
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- I'm leaiving toin Limerick in Sthe south-Wwest of Ireland ~~and I~~ shareing my accommodation with two fFrench boys.
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- I~~'m leaving to Limerick~~ stay in Limerick now, which is in South-West of Ireland, and I share ~~my accommodation~~an apartment with two fFrench ~~boys~~men.
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- I try to visit something every week-end because with my internship I am free saturday and sunday.
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- I ~~try to visit something every~~only get to explore different places during the week-end, because I am busy with my internship ~~I am free saturday and sun~~during weekdays.
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- Probably I will come to Galway next week-end.
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- Probably, I will ~~come~~go to Galway next week-end.
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- After to come in Ireland I was afraid didn't meet people and speak english but now I really happy to be here.
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- ~~After~~Before to come in Ireland I was afraid didn't meet people and speak english but now I really happy to be here.
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- ~~After to come in~~Before coming to Ireland, I was afraid ~~didn'~~to meet people and speak ein English but I am now I really happy to be here.
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- ~~After to come in~~Before coming to Ireland, I was afraid ~~didn'~~to meet people and speak eEnglish, but now I'm really happy to be here.
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- Nevertheless, my family and my friends are from France miss they.
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- Nevertheless, I miss my family and my friends ~~are from France miss they~~in France.
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- I come back in France the 20th December only.
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- I ~~come~~go back into France on the 20th of December ~~only~~.
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- I come back into France only on the 20th of December ~~only~~.
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- ~~I come back in France the 20th December only~~Still, I have to wait until December, 20 to go back to France.
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- Thanks to read me. Bye bye ;)
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- Thank~~s to~~ you for read meing. Bye bye ;)¶
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- Thanks tofor read meing this. Bye -bye ;)¶
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