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- Good day!
- My name is Nadya. Now I am 21.
- I am studying at the university on 5 degree and also I am working a bookkeeper now.
I am learning a accounting.
- In really I don't like this specialty, because it is necessary to sit all time of work near computer, and my eyes often get tired, of course there are another reasons.
- So... this is why, sometimes, I dream about good work, which in future will related with creation, maybe with drawing.
- I like to draw, I like to look on a beautiful pictures, photos, images.

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- Good day!
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- ~~Good day!~~Hello! / Good morning/afternoon/evening
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문장 2
- My name is Nadya. Now I am 21.
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- My name is Nadya~~. Now I a~~ (Nadia). I'm 21.
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- I am studying at the university on 5 degree and also I am working a bookkeeper now.
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- I am ~~studying at the university on 5 degree~~a 5th year university student, and also I amlso work~~ing~~ as a bookkeeper now.
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- I am learning a accounting.
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문장 5
- In really I don't like this specialty, because it is necessary to sit all time of work near computer, and my eyes often get tired, of course there are another reasons.
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- In reallyity, I don't like this specialty, because it is necessary to sit ~~all time of work near~~in front of a computer, a~~nd my eyes often get tired, o~~ll the time, thereby putting strain on my eyes. Of course there are another reasons.
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- In really I don't like this s~~pecialty~~ubject, because ~~it is necessary to sit all time of work near computer~~you have to sit in front of a computer all the time, and my eyes often get tired, and of course there are another reasons.
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문장 6
- So... this is why, sometimes, I dream about good work, which in future will related with creation, maybe with drawing.
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- So~~... this is why,~~ sometimes, I dream about ~~good work, which in future will related with~~work that involves creation, maybe with ~~drawing~~art.
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- I like to draw, I like to look on a beautiful pictures, photos, images.
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- I like to draw~~, I like t~~ and also look on at beautiful pictures, photos, and images.
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