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    • The Props And Cons of Shopping

    • I think shopping popular in my country because twenty-tree years ago the major part of society had problems with buying necessary things for their life.
    • As a result, now we have a lot of trade centers, shopping malls, and markets.
    • Now, people buy goods, clothes, and electronic devices, therefore they have common needs, and sometimes by followed advertising on TV, the radio, the bill boards and their friend’s recommendations.
    • In my opinion, negative side of shopping is money squander on things that never will be in use.
    • In my life I bought tons of stuff that I did not even use.
    • For example I have recently bought an alternative drink to tea as powder, because I followed my irrational mind and now do not drink that tea.
    • I believe, that third of society money's is spending on things that never are use.
    • As shopping is increase its popularity among of population, as more and more money wasted, that could be use to helps poor people.
    • The first positive thing of shopping, is increase goods and money turnover, that helps economy grow, and the government gets more taxes.
    • The second, is some people fill better after the bought useful thing for home and/or relatives.
    • In my experience, buying things make my grandmothers happier, and solve their problems.
    • To summarize my thought: shopping could improve economy, and could make people life better.
    • But it also would eliminate your money, if you will not use your conation while use them.
  • Thank you for your help!

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