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- Five days is not enough to visit Paris, but enough to fall in love with this city.
- I invite you on next trip to the wonderful place!
- On the first day this all what astounds visitors - luxury, wealth, ornaments.
- And so the State Opera and the Galeries Lafayette department store (last picture).

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- Five days is not enough to visit Paris, but enough to fall in love with this city.
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- Five days isare not enough to vdisitcover Paris, but enough to fall in love with this city.
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- I invite you on next trip to the wonderful place!
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- I invite you ~~on next trip to~~to visit theis wonderful place on your next trip!
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- On the first day this all what astounds visitors - luxury, wealth, ornaments.
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- ~~On the first day this all what~~ Luxury, wealth and ornaments astounds visitors ~~- luxury, wealth, ornaments.~~to the city,
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- And so the State Opera and the Galeries Lafayette department store (last picture).
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- Aand so do the State Opera and the Galeries Lafayette department store (last picture).
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