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hi everyone
- hi my name is gisell.
- I like to listen music and read a lot books.
- I hope to learn fast english and i wish travel and know a lot countries.

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- hi everyone
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- hi my name is gisell.
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- hiHi, my name i's gGisell.
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- I like to listen music and read a lot books.
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- I like to listen music and read a lot of books.
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- I like to listening to music and reading a lot of books.
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- I like to listen to music and read a lot of books.
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- I like to listening to music and read ~~a lot~~ing books.
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- I like to listening to music and read ~~a lot~~ books.
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- I like to listening to music and read ~~a lot~~ing books.
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- I hope to learn fast english and i wish travel and know a lot countries.
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- I hope to learn ~~fast e~~English quickly, and iI wish travel and get to know a lot of countries.
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- I hope to learn ~~fast e~~English and iI wish to travel and get to know a lot countries.
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- I hope to learn ~~fast~~ english very well and iI wish to travel and get to know a lot countries.
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- I hope to learn ~~fast e~~English quickly and iI wish to travel and know a lot of countries.
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- I ~~hope~~want to learn ~~fast e~~English and ~~i wish~~ travel ~~and know a lo~~to a lot of different countries.
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- I ~~hope~~want to learn ~~fast e~~English ~~and i wish travel and know a lot countries.~~ quickly and travel to a lot of different countries to get knowledge from them.
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