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Inspirational People
- In my life, I am facing many people and dealing with them, but there are a few people among my friends and colleagues are inspired people.
When I ask them, they give me not only advice but also inspiration to reach and achieve my goals.
- They words give me a lot of power.
When I am upset, I prefer to talk to them because I know they make me happy.
- I think, if someone don't have these kind of people around him, he/she may not complete his/her goals.

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- In my life, I am facing many people and dealing with them, but there are a few people among my friends and colleagues are inspired people.
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- In my life, I ~~am facing many peopl~~face and deal~~ing~~ with ~~them~~many people, but there are a few people among my friends and colleagues ~~are~~that inspire~~d peopl~~ me.
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- When I ask them, they give me not only advice but also inspiration to reach and achieve my goals.
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- They words give me a lot of power.
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- Theyir words give me a lot of power.
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- When I am upset, I prefer to talk to them because I know they make me happy.
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- I think, if someone don't have these kind of people around him, he/she may not complete his/her goals.
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- I think, that if someone doesn't have these kinds of people around him, he/she may not complete his/her goals.
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