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my opinion about the story.
- Recently, i read the first part of story that is called "One Day" ,by David Nickolls .
- I'm fond of this kind of stories and i spend an enjoyable time.I'm interested what will be next.

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- my opinion about the story.
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- Recently, i read the first part of story that is called "One Day" ,by David Nickolls .
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- Recently, iI read the first part of a story ~~that is~~ called "One Day," ,by David Nickolls .
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  67% GOOD (3 votes)
- Recently, iI read the first part of a story that is called "One Day" ,by David Nickolls .
  watchdog11 Komentar
  
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  100% GOOD (2 votes)
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Kalimat 2
- I'm fond of this kind of stories and i spend an enjoyable time.I'm interested what will be next.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- I'm fond of thisese kind of stories and ~~i spend~~I have an enjoyable time. reading them. I'm interested in what will be next.
  wagnator Komentar
  
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  67% GOOD (3 votes)
- I~~'m fond of~~ like this kind of stor~~ies~~y and iI've spendt an enjoyable time. I'm interested in what ~~will be~~is going to happen next.
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