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    • Dear Sir or Madam Would you need a fourth year engineering student for a 2 or 3 months training period or employment in Thermal and Energy sciences during April –June period ?
    • Having always been enticed by that concerning the thermal and energy sciences I am very motivated and would like to be of help for company in this domain.
    • My internship at “Direction départementale des territoires et de la mer » and a summer Job at the « Energie de France » company have strengthened my choice, heat transferts in bulding envelopes and renewable energies are an essential stake for future.
    • My two-year preparation course lets me to join the thermal engineering school of the --- - university, which taught me lifeplace (place of residence) and workplace arrangements.
    • I am hoping that my skills will be welcome in your company, working never afraid me and I always been motivate for this, with serious and involvement in each project I had to do.
    • Please find enclosed my resume.
    • Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you as soon as you can.

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    • Dear Sir or Madam Would you need a fourth year engineering student for a 2 or 3 months training period or employment in Thermal and Energy sciences during April –June period ?
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    • Dear Sir or /Madam,¶¶Would you need a fourth year engineering student¶ for a 2 or 3 months training period or employment I am inquiring about a possible internship with your company from April through June. I am a fourth year engineering student studying Thermal and Energy sSciences during April –June period ?.
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    • Dear Sir or Mad'am¶¶Would you need a fourth year engineering student¶ for a 2 or 3 months training period orf employment in Thermal and Energy sciences during April –June periodfor a period of April through June ?
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    • Having always been enticed by that concerning the thermal and energy sciences I am very motivated and would like to be of help for company in this domain.
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    • Having Motivated, have always been einticed by that concerning theerested in thermal and energy sciences¶ I am very motivated and would like to be of help for company in this domai. Will bring enthusiasm and willingness to learn under your direction.
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    • Having always been einticed by that concerning theriuge by thermal and energy sciences,¶ I am very motivated and would like to be of help for your company in this domain.
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    • My internship at “Direction départementale des territoires et de la mer » and a summer Job at the « Energie de France » company have strengthened my choice, heat transferts in bulding envelopes and renewable energies are an essential stake for future.
      투표하세요!
    • My past internship at “Direction départementale des territoires et de la mer » and a summer Jjob at the « Energie de France » company have strengthenhave further re-enforced my choice, that heat transferts in building envelopes and renewable energies are an essential stake forin the future.
      JonnyfrankJonnyfrank profile picture 댓글
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • My internship at “«Direction départementale des territoires et de la mer » and a summer Job at the « Energie de France » company have strengthened my choice, heat transferts in bulding envelopes and renewable energies are an essential stake for future.
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    • My two-year preparation course lets me to join the thermal engineering school of the --- - university, which taught me lifeplace (place of residence) and workplace arrangements.
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    • My two-year preparation course letsallowed me to join the thermal engineering school of the --- -(name here) university, which taught me lifeplace (place of residence) and workplace arrangements.
      JonnyfrankJonnyfrank profile picture 댓글
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
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    • I am hoping that my skills will be welcome in your company, working never afraid me and I always been motivate for this, with serious and involvement in each project I had to do.
      투표하세요!
    • I am hoping thathope my skills will be welcome inof value to your company, working never afraid me and I always been motivate for this, with serious and involvement in each project I had to do and look forward to any opportunities that you can offer at this time.
      JonnyfrankJonnyfrank profile picture 댓글
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • I am hoping that my skills will be welcome in your company, working never afraid meIm not afraid of hard work and I 've always been motivated for this, with. i will be serious andin the involvement in each project I hadve to do.
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