添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

moonbeeからのテキスト - English

  • Game

    • I play in games in XBox with my friends tonight.
    • We play in Diablo 3, fighting and ets.
    • We reservet piZza.
    • Guys drink beer.
    • And we had fun. :)

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English