Korrigeringer

HJELP TIL Å RETTE NÅ! Rettet opp

Tekst fra Lolasundric - English

Opprinnelige Versjonen
Rettet Versjon

My life
- Hello .
- My name is Lola i have 25 yers old.
- I coming from Bosnia and Herzegovina , I live in Sarajevo , this is the Capital City , and wunderful place.
- I have a Family and i Love them. i Stady Public relations, in my free time i like a Swiming, riding and go to the cinema.

LolasundricOctober 2013Stem nå!
- Report as spam?

VÆR SÅ SNILL, HJELP TIL MED Å RETTE HVER SETNING! - English

Tittel
- My life
  Stem nå!
- LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Tittel
Setning 1
- Hello .
  Stem nå!
- Hello .
  thiendnguyen Kommentarer
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Stem nå!
- Hello .,
  sayedasif Kommentarer
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Stem nå!
- LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 1
Setning 2
- My name is Lola i have 25 yers old.
  Stem nå!
- My name is Lola ~~i have~~I am 25 years old.
  sayedasif Kommentarer
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Stem nå!
- LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 2
Setning 3
- I coming from Bosnia and Herzegovina , I live in Sarajevo , this is the Capital City , and wunderful place.
  Stem nå!
- I com~~ing~~e from Bosnia and Herzegovina ,. I live in Sarajevo ,; this is the Capital City , and wuit's a wonderful place.
  masjns2424 Kommentarer
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Stem nå!
- I ~~coming~~am from Bosnia and Herzegovina , and I lived in Sarajevo ~~, this~~. It is the Capital ~~City , and wu~~of the country and a wonderful place.
  sayedasif Kommentarer
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Stem nå!
- LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 3
Setning 4
- I have a Family and i Love them. i Stady Public relations, in my free time i like a Swiming, riding and go to the cinema.
  Stem nå!
- I have a Ffamily and iI Love them. ~~i Sta~~I study Public rRelations, in my free time i . I like a Swiming, riding and go ~~to the~~ing for cinema.
  sayedasif Kommentarer
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Stem nå!
- LEGG TIL EN NY RETTELSE! - Setning 4