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POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ TERAZ!Niepoprawione

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    • People can known each other more convenient than past because of the high-tech, but it not means that we were closer than previous since the depth of relationship cannot be promoted without face to face communication.
    • A case in point is Massager, a communicate software programmed by Microsoft, offered people a way for long distance talk.
    • For most of people who used this program, the contacts who they talked most frequently are always acquaintances and even the rare acquaintances were also run away if they didn’t talk with each other.
  • (Thanks for Mrs. blmishoe's previous patient correction works, Please accept my heartfelt appreciation.)

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

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    • People can known each other more convenient than past because of the high-tech, but it not means that we were closer than previous since the depth of relationship cannot be promoted without face to face communication.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • People can known each other more conveniently than in the past because of the high-techmodern technology, but it does not means that we weare closer than previously since the depth of relationship cannot be promoted without face to face communication.
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    • People can known each other more convenient than past because of the high-tech, but it not means that we were closer than previous since the depth of relationship cannot be promoted without face to face communication.
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    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
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    • For most of people who used this program, the contacts who they talked most frequently are always acquaintances and even the rare acquaintances were also run away if they didn’t talk with each other.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • For most of the people who used this program, the contacts who they talked to most frequently awere always acquaintances and even the rare acquaintances were also run awayemoved? lost? if they didn’t talk with each other.
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    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3
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