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My Hometown

• I was glow up in a small town in Taiwan.

• It located in the center of Taiwan, so means it does not close to sea but close to mountains.

• many people in my country know it, because it has good quality sweet potato and bamboo.

• And there are several very famous visit place around it.

• One of the most famous is a "rich god temple". if you agree by the god you can barrow a small amount of money from god. people call the money as "money mother" which means it can bring more money to you.

• People there are always friendly and kind, many people knows each other. if I walk on the street, I can easy to point which house is my old classmate's home. and another house is belong to whom, what business are they doing now.

• Actually, I have leave my hometown for a long time.

• I wish I can come back.

• My parents are still live there.

• I want spent more time with them.