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Hi.
My name is Kostya.
- I live in Russia on Ural.
- I'm twenty seven years old.
- I work ingineer in internet provider company.
- I want to learn English because i want to travel to other countries, watch movies and read books on English.
- Thanks for help and sorry for mistakes.

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- My name is Kostya.
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- I live in Russia on Ural.
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- I'm twenty seven years old.
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- I work ingineer in internet provider company.
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- I want to learn English because i want to travel to other countries, watch movies and read books on English.
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- I want to learn English because i want to travel to other countries, watch movies and read books oin English.
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- Thanks for help and sorry for mistakes.
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