添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

tomlittleからのテキスト - English

  • My fabulous job

    • My name is Mathieu. I'am 30.
  • My job is to help people who lose total or partial autonomy.
    • Actually, i work in the department that hosts people desoriented or suffering Alzeimer syndrom.
    • This service count 20 patients.
    • They have between 70 and 95 years.
    • The almost are in wheelchair.
    • My help can be translate by activities of daily life as to wash, eat and drink, revel.
    • I replace the patient in the time and space when they lost.
    • I must be carefull when they lost because they can become agressive.
    • I must look if the patient is in good health with externals signs.
    • The skin condition or the color can be show an important problem of health.
    • In that event, i must contact the nurse or the doctor.
    • After my job, i must write all the observations in the patient files for others caregivers and nurses.
    • This observations take informations for continu the care and have the right to behave.
    • I wanted this job because with my last job, i was born.
    • Now i feel useful (management assistant)

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English