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HELP TO CORRECT NOW!uncorrected

Text from Herbrou - English

  • two small literary sentences to correct

    • Native speakers loving their language, please support me) A palpation of the border between killing and being killed.
    • A naked snapshot of an ego and his world.
  • How does it sound?
  • What do you think?
  • Thanks a lot!!!! Herbrou

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English