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Texto de rong918 - English

    • My favore vehicle

    • I am not a rich guy, so I did not drive a lot of vehicle before.
    • I was owned several sedan, they are used car, and two vans.
    • I used them for transport and deliver goods.
    • there has a vehicle I dream to have, I not sure how to call it.
    • It is a two floor bus which could load a lot of things, and usually use for tour bus.
    • I hope I could have one the two floor bus. do you know in Australia, especially in Western Australia, there has no convenient public transport system.
    • And there has so much amazing place to visit where the public traffic could not reach.
    • So I dream if I have a two floor bus.
    • I could let the lower floor as a living room and kitchen where I can cook and put a sofa for relax.
    • And the higher floor it could be my bedroom.
    • I would like to lay down on my bed and enjoy the view around me.
    • definitely I hope there has one or two friends come with me, or a girl friend. share the life with my closest people is most wonderful time.
    • I would park the bus in one place maybe three or four months, I like slow life speed, it let me have time to know a small town or see some little bird and animal around that place.
    • And maybe make a friend with a local person.
  • That is my dream, and all I have to do is make money now....

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