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  • 3) Who am I?
    • This is of course a pretty complex question to answer… But don’t worry, I will ;) So everything began on a foggy day of November 1993, in a cold and small town on the top of a Swiss mountain.
    • So was born baby Sophie.
  • But what happened to her then?
  • Well, she grew up pretty fast and happy and travelled a lot around Europe during the holidays throughout her childhood.
    • One lucky day, she landed in Spain and immediately fell in love with that country… And that’s why, as soon as she could (this means, as soon as she finished this freaking High-School…), she decided to make her dream come true and go to live in Madrid.
    • First, she planned to stay only for one year, working as an Au-pair (btw: in the best family ever!!) and studying Spanish.
    • But the city basically caught her in its magical net and here she is, settled in for at least one more year in the city of her dreams; speaking the language she loves the most; meeting lots of new nice people from anywhere around the world; growing strong friendships; studying English, Spanish, Italian and Russian; teaching French and English to some cute (and some less cute…) kids or adults and learning how to be independent and live on her own without getting in trouble every other minute…

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    • This is of course a pretty complex question to answer… But don’t worry, I will ;) So everything began on a foggy day of November 1993, in a cold and small town on the top of a Swiss mountain.
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    • This is of course a pretty complex question to answer… But don’t worry, I will ;) So everything began on a foggy day ofin November 1993, in a cold and small town on the top of a Swiss mountain.
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    • One lucky day, she landed in Spain and immediately fell in love with that country… And that’s why, as soon as she could (this means, as soon as she finished this freaking High-School…), she decided to make her dream come true and go to live in Madrid.
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    • One lucky day, she landed in Spain and immediately fell in love with that country… Aand that’s why, as soon as she could (this means, as soon as she finished this freaking High-School…), she decided to make her dream come true and go to live in Madrid.
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    • First, she planned to stay only for one year, working as an Au-pair (btw: in the best family ever!!) and studying Spanish.
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    • First, she planned to stay only for one year, working as an Au-pair (btw: iny the way, for the best family ever!!) and studying Spanish.
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    • But the city basically caught her in its magical net and here she is, settled in for at least one more year in the city of her dreams; speaking the language she loves the most; meeting lots of new nice people from anywhere around the world; growing strong friendships; studying English, Spanish, Italian and Russian; teaching French and English to some cute (and some less cute…) kids or adults and learning how to be independent and live on her own without getting in trouble every other minute…
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    • But the city basically caught her in its magical net and here she is, settled taying for at least one more year in the city of her dreams; speaking the language she loves the most; meeting lots of new niceice, new people from aneverywhere around the world; growcreating strong friendships; studying English, Spanish, Italian and Russian; teaching French and English to some cute (and some less cute…) kids or adults and learning how to be independent and live on her own without getting in trouble every other minute…
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