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  • Hi, I'm new in this page!

    • Hello everyone!, I'm new in this page.
    • I'm 21, and I want to learn Enghish.
    • Now, I'm studiying an upper cycle (FPII) of Industrial maintenance.
    • This work requires a good English speaking, because this people travel a lot to other countries.
  • This is my little presentation.
    • Other day, I'll writte other thing. Thanks to all!

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