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    • Knowledge is happiness

  • Have you ever felt happy learning a new fact about this world of facts?
    • For sure I don’t mean knowing the latest news of terrorist attacks and like that but the world itself apart from our deeds.
    • The more we learn about it the more we feel for it, like getting to know your new friend better and empathise better.
    • However, sometimes you don’t like to know friends better, you know, while the more you know this real world of ours, the more your appetite is whetted.
    • It is as if you hold a jug made of water bellow a waterfall so that your jug grows containing more water and there will be no end to that.
    • The same way, you come to hug the reality more than before.
    • So, what it has to do with happiness?
    • The very same thing your home has to do with your pleasure of being home again, as they say: “Home, sweet home!” Coming to synchronize more with the reality, you enjoy it more!
    • The world and reality itself become your source of happiness and since they are always around you or to be more accurate, since you are a part of them, you will be always happy.

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    • For sure I don’t mean knowing the latest news of terrorist attacks and like that but the world itself apart from our deeds.
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    • For sure II certainly don’t mean knowhearing the latest news of terrorist attacks and the like that but the world itself apart from our deedsbut rather learning about the world itself.
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    • The more we learn about it the more we feel for it, like getting to know your new friend better and empathise better.
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    • The more we learn about it the more we feel for it,. It's like getting to know youra new friend better andand starting to empathisze betterwith them.
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    • However, sometimes you don’t like to know friends better, you know, while the more you know this real world of ours, the more your appetite is whetted.
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    • However, sometimes you don’t like to know friends better, you know,it is not always that you want to keep getting to know someone better; while the more you know this reallearn about the world of ours, the more your appetite is whetted thirst to learn.
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    • It is as if you hold a jug made of water bellow a waterfall so that your jug grows containing more water and there will be no end to that.
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    • It is as if you holdmagine a jug made of water. If you hold it bellow a waterfall so that your jug grows containing more water and there will be no end to thatthe jug will grow bigger and bigger; it will never stop growing.
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    • The very same thing your home has to do with your pleasure of being home again, as they say: “Home, sweet home!” Coming to synchronize more with the reality, you enjoy it more!
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    • The very same thing your connection to your home has to do with your pleasure of being home again, ashappiness. It is not for nothing they say:, “Home, sweet home!” ComThe more you get ing to synchronize moreuch with the reality, you enjoy it more!the more joy you find.
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    • The world and reality itself become your source of happiness and since they are always around you or to be more accurate, since you are a part of them, you will be always happy.
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    • The world and reality itself become your source of happiness and s. Since they are always around you or to be more accurate, since you are a part of them, you will bestaying in touch with them will keep you always happy. ¶
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