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  • My dreams

    • Some time I think what I want know how in my future.
    • And I understand that I want many things and if I not start now I will sorry about it in my future.
    • For example I always like dance .Earlier We with my friends visited night club very often but now it s very rarely.I want to learn salsa and I hope next month I will take my husband and visit lessons of salsa.
    • Also I very like hight .I started learn to fly by paraglider 4 years ago .it was very cool but I finished because my Mather afraid about me and her heart started be sick.I want take learning paragliding tour in foreign country but it requires good English.
    • And I want to know many languages because it give you freedom with communicating, choice of work and place of living.
  • I know I can do it.
    • The main things after heavy day to remember about my dreams

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    • And I understand that I want many things and if I not start now I will sorry about it in my future.
      투표하세요!
    • And I understand that I want many things and if I nodon't start doing them now, I will sorry abouregret it in my future.
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    • And I understand that I want many things, and if I nodon't start now I will be sorry about it in myin the future.
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    • For example I always like dance .Earlier We with my friends visited night club very often but now it s very rarely.I want to learn salsa and I hope next month I will take my husband and visit lessons of salsa.
      투표하세요!
    • For example I always like to dance . Earlier We with my friends and I often visited a night club very often, but now it 's very rarely. I want to learn salsa and I hope next month I will take my husband and visit lessons of salsatake salsa lessons.
      peddarspeddars profile picture 댓글
    • For example I always like to dance .Earlier We with. Me and my friends used to visited night clubs very often but now it s verywe rarely. go. I want to learn salsa and I hope next month, I willcould take my husband and visit lessons of salsatake salsa lessons.
      jeemeegeejeemeegee profile picture 댓글
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    • Also I very like hight .I started learn to fly by paraglider 4 years ago .it was very cool but I finished because my Mather afraid about me and her heart started be sick.I want take learning paragliding tour in foreign country but it requires good English.
      투표하세요!
    • Also I very likeam not afraid of heights. Four years ago .I started to learn to fly byusing a paraglider 4 years ago .i. It was very cool but I finishstopped because my Mamother was afraid aboutfor me and her heart started be sick.it was making her ill. I want to take learninga paragliding tour in a foreign country, but ithis requires good English.
      peddarspeddars profile picture 댓글
    • Also, I very like heights a lot. .I started learn how to fly by paraglider 4 years ago . it was very cool but I finishstopped because my Mamother was afraid aboutfor me and her heart started beto get sick. I want takeo learning paragliding tour in foreign country but it requires good English.
      jeemeegeejeemeegee profile picture 댓글
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    • And I want to know many languages because it give you freedom with communicating, choice of work and place of living.
      투표하세요!
    • And I want to know many languages because it give yous me freedom with communicationg, choice of work and place of living.
      peddarspeddars profile picture 댓글
    • And I want to knowlearn many languages because it gives you freedom within communicationg, choice of work, and place of living.
      jeemeegeejeemeegee profile picture 댓글
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