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HELP TO CORRECT NOW!Parandamata

Text from IreneZ - English

  • Don't be tigerish - save the tiger!

  • (This is a short leaflet I have to write for one olimpiad.
  • I'll be glad to get any corrections or tips how to improve the text.Thanks forward!) Attention!
  • Ussurisky tigers are at the edge of extiction.
    • Every year 50 of them are dieing at the poachers hands.If you don't want to let tigers vanish...
    • 1.join an animal welfare group 2.create awareness of problem among the population 3.donate money We can reduce fur consuming by common efforts!
  • Live and let live.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English